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Comment on Feature Coverage: Controversy surrounds Dexter High School’s The Squall by Emily Hayward

Emily Hayward — Wed, 03 Aug 2011 20:03:16 +0000

I commented earlier on this article as it was later posted (as the Sparty Winner for Feature Coverage). Part of the article was cut off in the other posting, and I was hoping that wouldn’t be too hard to fix since there’s an original copy of my work on the site right here, without anything being cut off. I was wondering if maybe you could take the article from here and just fix the part of my article that was cut off? Sorry if that wasn’t clear. Please let me know if there’s anything I can do to help.

Comment on Sparty Winner: Feature Coverage by Emily Hayward

Emily Hayward — Wed, 03 Aug 2011 19:19:07 +0000

I know it’s really late to ask about this and I don’t know if anything can be done, but this is my story and part of it must have been cut off when this was posted. The paragraph that begins with “To find the cause of that…” is actually a quote, and the part after “20 minutes” should be the rest of the quote. Instead, it’s the beginning of my next transition paragraph (which is why my article doesn’t make much sense when you read that part). I’m wondering if there’s anything that can be done. I still have a copy of my story, and I can send it to you if that would be any help. Sorry to bring this up (especially so late) and cause a hassle. Please let me know if there’s anything I can do. Thank you!

Comment on Complete Yearbook students continue workshop week with photography, captions by William Sullivan

William Sullivan — Wed, 03 Aug 2011 18:46:56 +0000

I remember the days of creating captions. It always helped it seemed when we got in a big group and shot ideas off of each other

Comment on Review: ‘Ballroom’ strikes balance between humor, intrigue by Small crowd gathers to watch ‘Ballroom’ « The Upstart

Small crowd gathers to watch ‘Ballroom’ « The Upstart — Wed, 03 Aug 2011 18:03:25 +0000

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Comment on Review: Mad Hot Ballroom by Small crowd gathers to watch ‘Ballroom’ « The Upstart

Small crowd gathers to watch ‘Ballroom’ « The Upstart — Wed, 03 Aug 2011 17:50:19 +0000

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Comment on Second day is a second chance to refresh newspapers by Thomas Wheadon

Thomas Wheadon — Wed, 03 Aug 2011 00:09:57 +0000

This is so edgy!

Comment on Newspaper editors class has power of speech by jacoller

jacoller — Tue, 02 Aug 2011 12:06:21 +0000

Best class at MIPA!!!

Comment on Cheryl Pell to retire from MIPA by Betsy Rau

Betsy Rau — Tue, 02 Aug 2011 03:07:16 +0000

This is a very well-written story, Danielle! You captured her accurately and added a nice touch to the story with her quotes.

Comment on Students share expectations for 2011 MIPA Journalism Workshops by Directors welcome students to 2011 MIPA Journalism Workshops’ ‘J-Cation’ « The Upstart

Mon, 01 Aug 2011 02:36:39 +0000

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Comment on Sparty Winner: The Bobby Hawthorne Experience by Carolyn

Carolyn — Sat, 07 Aug 2010 00:21:21 +0000

Julia! I’m so glad I met you and this is beautiful! You are an amazing writer.